Semarang State University (SSU) is a state university located in the capital city of Central Java Province. According to Education and Social Culture ministry SSU has been awarded as the 4th most favorite campus in Indonesia this year. This big university which has about 49.000 students studying in various courses offered. Currently SSU has 8 faculties and a post-graduate program. They are; Educational Sciences Faculty, Languages and Arts Faculty, Social Sciences Faculty, Mathematics and Natural Sciences Faculty, Engineering Faculty, Sport Sciences Faculty, Economics Faculty, Law Faculty, and Post-graduate Program. On SSU, March 12th 2010, SSU was declared as a Conservation University. It has 7 pillars, they are; Conservation of Biodiversity, Green Architecture and Internal Transportation, Paperless Policy, Waste Management, Clean Energy, Art Cultural Conservation and Conservation Cadres. This special program has known over the mother-land, they usually call SSU as a green campus. The students not only domestic students here but also International students. Annually, International students are studying culture, language and works. They come from many countries over the world. Not only well-known in Indonesia but also the world.
Dear Hajar,
ReplyDeleteI enjoy reading your text about our beloved university because it is easy to be understood and exactly describe SSU. However, I think there are some points that you need to work on :
• “The students not only domestic students here but also International students.” It is nomine sentence, so your sentence should be => The students are not only domestic students here but also International students.
• “ Not only well-known in Indonesia but also the world.” It is not a sentence because there is no subject there. You can fix it with “SSU is not only well-known in Indonesia but also the world.”
Maybe you can consider my opinion about your text above. Good Job!
Thank you for your correction, Hesti.
ReplyDeleteI do hope, you will make some correction (again) on my works someday.